My third update

My third update is all about a song describing the characters In a story that we have been reading.

My second update

This slide of mine shows you all things that have gone past through the year

My First update.

The bush

Every picture tells a story.

Use your imagination and experience to narrate (tell) a story about the photo.

Where are the people going? Why?

What problem is caused? How is it solved?

Think about:

• where your story is set
• who your characters are – what they do, what they say, and how they think and feel
• the problem and how it is solved
• the order of your ideas and how they are linked.

Remember to:

• choose your words carefully
• take care with your spelling, punctuation, and sentences
• edit – add or delete words or sentences to improve your work.

Start writing here:

As we were wondering into the bushes where there were shimmering mest we heard a crack as my friends and i were going further into the bushes there were strange noises like someone was coming towards us.Then suddenly a terrifying monster jumped out of nowhere and roared like no roar  i’ve ever heard before, it had shark like teeth, sharp claws, spikes coming out of the creatures back my friends and I got very scared that we tried to find our way home but we couldn’t that’s when I remembered that we retraced our tracks as we were going further into the bushes.So all we had to do is look for those trace marks, then at once we got home safe and sound.

My Chapter chat montage

This is every thing that I have done through the year. That I will miss when I move on to new classes maybe we wont ever do it again, or we might.

My calender challenge

My camp presentation

my chapter chat trophy with friendz

This was our last chapter chat works for the year and I will miss chapter chat.

My super duper camp writing

   Camp writing

    

Feel	See	Hear	Smell	Think	Say
-Tepid *Cossie *active	*Burning of fire in front of my face -Kids and teachers singing nice songs all night -Torches swaying side to side as the people sing. Parent’s dancing	*Wood crackling *people singing along to more songs *nice	Smoke	This was the funnest and challenging est day ever.	Tonight was the best night to choose to do the campfire.

The colossal bonfire

I sat in front of the biggest largest colossal bonfire  I have ever seen late at night. I felt tepid and sluggish, and  I saw fire the hot furious fire burning in front of  me it felt light it was right in front of me it felt like one side of the fire had my head in it, and on the other side was from the middle of my stomach and lower. After feeling that I had saw that people were crowded around a group of parents I gathered around the parents too. They started their dance and it looked like they were in their swimming suits, there were also three more parents left out but when I looked properly the parents that were left out were singing lip sink singing. When they were finished all the kids had to get to sleep quick  cause it was super late at night and it was happy to go to sleep because it was about to fall to the ground

The end.

By Melbourne