My First update.

The bush

Every picture tells a story.

Use your imagination and experience to narrate (tell) a story about the photo.

Where are the people going? Why?

What problem is caused? How is it solved?

Think about:

• where your story is set
• who your characters are – what they do, what they say, and how they think and feel
• the problem and how it is solved
• the order of your ideas and how they are linked.

Remember to:

• choose your words carefully
• take care with your spelling, punctuation, and sentences
• edit – add or delete words or sentences to improve your work.

Start writing here:

As we were wondering into the bushes where there were shimmering mest we heard a crack as my friends and i were going further into the bushes there were strange noises like someone was coming towards us.Then suddenly a terrifying monster jumped out of nowhere and roared like no roar  i’ve ever heard before, it had shark like teeth, sharp claws, spikes coming out of the creatures back my friends and I got very scared that we tried to find our way home but we couldn’t that’s when I remembered that we retraced our tracks as we were going further into the bushes.So all we had to do is look for those trace marks, then at once we got home safe and sound.